Wednesday, January 27, 2010

The Path Of A Gambler Comments

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A man sought coin in a voluminous fashion,
a few more pounds to add to his loot,
used to help satisfy a prodigal passion.
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Michael Roysdon
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Frank Papaycik 06 February 2010

I'm fascinated by the use of -repetition-The lines: A man...fashion...used...passion. Would the last stanza have more impact as a tercet?

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