Thursday, July 14, 2011

The Poll Draw Comments

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On the birth of day
I lazingly bestrided my lair
With thoughts tearing my hope like dagger
Which tickled my will?
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Job Laz
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Tai Chi Italy 14 July 2011

This is a fabulous poem JL. I read it twice and on the second reading it's finess exploded into my open heart. The final two lines are brilliant, and I learned a new word. 'Rapacity' is the bane of our society today. Greedy blood sucking excuses for human beings have a vice like grip, but your poem has the capacity to break free. Thank you for reminding me how POLL should be spelt also! lol Smiling at you Tai

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