The Remembrance Comments

allah is really here, and allah is every where, do not seek any thing from any one but from allah, he will give every thing through men or directly as the streagth of the soul etc, very fantastic flow, fantastic rhyme which inspires you to write this poem along with the common but very important points -after all a very nice poem, nice, i have written some would you like to read and comment with rating which will help me in future