Sunday, June 7, 2009

The River Flows Comments

Rating: 5.0

The river flows quiet and swift
It twists and turns as the waters drift
It branches and breaks—its fingers entwine
It grows and grows—snakes like a vine.
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Kailey Jennings
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Pooop 30 June 2020

Your voice sucked so much. I would rather die

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 February 2015

It seems as smooth as water per se, flowing very delicately gently till it reaches its destination. Poem will rhyme within the heart for some time. Very sweet stuff.

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Henna B 20 April 2012

this is sssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good do u no that the one that says the river so clear and cool i have the same every word

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Henna B 20 April 2012

this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good i have the exact same words as the one that says the river so clear and cool ect

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ooohhh, i love this poem... it's goimg to my fav.

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