The Ruins Poem by Ndimancho T Nyowikeh

The Ruins

There she comes,
Pretty Melissa, glad in bangles.
Charms around her fetching waist.

The dream of harbouring her was just an inch.
The enchanting rose flowers that lay,
Gave only a beauteous scene
For the secret time there to meet Monalissa.

But then, came the ruins
When I profess my affection.
Saying,
I'm so much into her.
After the ruins,
Then came our departure.

_Ndimancho T. Nyowikeh_

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In the poem 'The Ruins' by Ndimancho T. Nyowikeh, the speaker reflects on a romantic relationship that ended in disappointment and heartbreak. The poem begins with the speaker admiring Mellisa's beauty and expressing a desire to be close to her. The use of imagery, such as 'charms round her fetching waist' and 'enchanting rose flower, ' conveys the speaker's admiration for Mellisa's physical appearance. However, the tone of the poem shifts when the speaker confesses his affection for Mellisa, only to be met with rejection. The use of the word 'ruins' conveys a sense of devastation and loss, as the speaker's hopes for a romantic connection are dashed. The speaker expresses his disappointment at the outcome, as he had hoped for a different result. The poem ends with the speaker reflecting on the aftermath of the rejection, describing it as 'our departure.' This suggests a sense of finality and separation in the relationship, as both parties go their separate ways.'The Ruins' captures the theme of unrequited love and the pain of rejection in a relationship. The poem effectively conveys the speaker's feelings of disappointment and loss through evocative language and emotional imagery.
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