Kuldeep Sarkar

Freshman - 547 Points (Krishnagar)

The Slave. - Poem by Kuldeep Sarkar

Wait Master, I am coming
With warm salted water.
I will be there to wash your feet and do all the dances for you.
Wait Master, let me bring my chains, a chair for you to sit.

I am the servant of my ego and my habit.

Topic(s) of this poem: abstract, deep, life, philosophical , philosophy, slave, thoughts


Comments about The Slave. by Kuldeep Sarkar

  • Luis Estable (7/3/2017 1:04:00 PM)

    The title of this poem is, Slave. And this is what the poem talks about, so the title succeds. Choosing a good titile for a poem is no easy task since it can help a lot the reader to see what kind of argument is to be made or made in the poem.

    I found the last line a bit diffcult. I do not grasp it completely. But the rest of the poem presents no problems.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 3, 2017



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