The Star Poem by Harshada Pathare

The Star

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I took a deep breath,
and picked up my pace

to catch a shimmering star,
falling on an open field

I got stunned and wondered,
as it melted with my tears and promises
but picked up the thread of my story to share

The Star
Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2020

to catch a shimmering star, falling on an open field...i smiled and imagined that i am also running for a falling star...... lovely. your heart seems to be very pure to write such poems. t ony

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