Saturday, February 9, 2008

The State Of Alone Comments

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Tracing the borders of Alone that lay on the edges of the sky
Realize how deep wide and high Alone can be
Like the ocean’s bottomless pit that holds the answers to why
It swallows you up and invades your heart like the swelling sea
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R R 27 May 2008

Reading this poem, cannot help but sigh and shake head, - not meaning it is not well done. In contrast, it depicts such a vivid picture of how awful being alone - nothing around, nothing inside, no signal of life, and no signal of love - can be. Personally think, being alone physically is not horrible, what is truly unbearable is being alone mentally. And if we have faith, dreams, love, and pursuit, we can be accompanied by various friends, even though invisible, and have no time to be alone menatally.

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