Monday, June 21, 2010

The Sun Rise Comments

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I see the sunrise, you see the sunset
Same time, different place, lives seperate

Once connected but now were apart
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Julio Hernandez
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Loved the poetic imagery, felt emotion, the first two lines formed a strong foundation for the rest of the write! Thanks for sharing; D The Sun Rise..a new beginning!

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Julio Hernandez

Julio Hernandez

Bronx, New York
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