Tuesday, February 16, 2010
The True Veteran Comments
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A man came to me at a gas station
asking for change.
He said he needed gas so he could get home.
I didn't believe him.
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Ravi A
16 February 2010
I got the theme but the last line - I regret it - simply deceived me. What do you actually mean by it? You were watching him fill his gas with contentment and then you end the poem like this. What do you actually mean?
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12/31/2025 11:43:42 AM # 1.0.0
generosity came over me i didn't ask for it i regret giving him money i earned and just because i watched fill up didn't mean i was content it just meant he was honest about his intentions with the money (The TRUE Veteran)