Wednesday, November 28, 2007

The War Comments

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They roared as they fled over the field
Feeling no mercy as they killed
Their rival's hope dropp to the floor
Screams, tears and cries galore
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Fabian Lien 28 November 2007

haha... nice comment at the bottom... yeah some parts are kinda wierd: p but the content is good... nd theres a deep message in it... nice!

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