Tuesday, April 13, 2010

The Wolf's Sorrow Comments

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A lonesome wolf cries,
for his ancient love,
now lost in the star,
of the heavens above.
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Jesse Griffin
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Titi Dale 22 March 2013

Nice work here! Although I felt confused on the wording of the last two lines of the second stanza, the rest ran along smoothly: -) Titi

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