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Sounds of chewed nails being trodden underfoot. As I march to the score board. I am getting heaps of 1's lately. My work must be dreadful. You at least have a strong following and 10 can bring the scores back up quicker. So here is another 10+ Hugs Jan

They certaining don't....they capture the reader! Excellent. C

Is it really hard work sandra, poetry all i do is write it down dont check anything and god help anyone who does, touch my work that is good or bad it comes how it is, nice to know you work hard at it, you will be rewarded Warm regards allan

How about: 'Some of my poems hit the screen like a comet'