Sunday, May 25, 2008

There’s Something About Those Eyes Comments

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I try hard to forget
But I can’t, I realize
Disturbing me day & night
There’s something about those eyes.
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Vivek Mehta
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Scarletto Michuru 25 May 2008

Very well described. The details make it so vivid and beautiful, even mysterious. What i love most about it is that there is feeling in the words you wrote. That is how a good poem should be written.

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