Friday, November 25, 2005

There Stands The Boy Across The Room Comments

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There stands the boy across the room
The boy that makes my life worth while
The boy I wake up thinking about
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Natalie Clyne
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Miranda Coffey 27 November 2005

Aww Natalie! (inser big hug from miranda here) I think everybody has to go through a painful love story at least once in their life...I know I've been there and done that. This is such an honest poem, and those are the kinds that can ping on everyone's hearts and make them realize that they've been there too...even when they don't want to admit it. ~miranda

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Charley60 K 25 November 2005

On Natalie, this was like a love story or reminded me of a time in my life-not as far, but similiar. Well written and well said even the truth that just because we can and love someone doesn't mean he will feel the same. It's hard letting go-but a good ending, if nothing more....friends.

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