Monday, April 15, 2013

Think Once Again! Comments

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It is not mandatory that what you want,
Is always there in your fate.
It sometimes can be reason for your happiness,
But moreover it is the cause of hate.
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Akhil Singh Pundir
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

Life is ridiculous and can't be changed, Like without mistakes experienced can't be gained. Forget your past and open your eyes, Might god have planned for you a better surprise. is life ridiculous? ? ? ? ? ? ? why cant u change your life? ? ? ? life is not ridiculous. you can change your life in every possible way with strong determination.! ! lifes lessons will teach you that my dear poet. thank you for your boldness to write what u really think. God bless you. tony

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L. R Nickle 15 April 2013

Its so true! God always have a better plan than you! I love Life is ridiculous and cannot be changed

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Gajanan Mishra 15 April 2013

For a better surprise. good poem. thanks. I invite you Akhil Arya to read my poems and comment.

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