This Line Pauses Poem by Rajendra Prasad Meena Jaipur India

This Line Pauses

This line pauses
before it begins.
Not from fear,
but from care.

The next line arrives slowly,
carrying meaning
the way hands carry water—
without spilling.

Here, words are not pushed.
They are placed.
Silence is not empty;
it is working.

Read on.
You will feel
the poem leaning closer.
Not to impress you,
but to stay.

And when you finish,
something remains—
not a message,
but a quiet attention
you did not have before.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
1. Genre Contemporary Indian Free Verse Poetry 2. Central Idea: The poem emphasizes the value of pause, care, and silence in the creation and reading of poetry. It suggests that meaning does not emerge through speed or display, but through attention and restraint.3. Themes Silence as a creative force Slow growth of meaning Reader's active participation Attention over information 4. Style and Language: Simple and precise diction Minimalist structure No ornamental language or exaggeration Grammatically correct and balanced sentences 5. Imagery and Symbols: Pause, awareness and reflection Hands carrying water → careful handling of meaning Silence working → silence as productive, not empty These images reflect an Indian philosophical sense of balance and mindfulness.6. Tone Calm, reflective: and inviting. The poem does not instruct or persuade; it gently draws the reader in.7. Message of the Poem The poem encourages the reader to slow down and experience language deeply. Its purpose is not to deliver a fixed message, but to leave the reader with a sense of quiet attention.8. Uniqueness of the Poem Lacks a traditional narrative yet maintains movement Engages the reader without direct address Focuses on experience rather than explanation
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