Tuesday, September 15, 2009

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Thoughts
By: Artistic Perspective
September 15,2009
Age 12
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Timothy Venard 17 September 2009

very good - nice theme very interesting thorts - be carfull not miss parts out to mke things rhym, like 'the brink' - we dont know what ur on the brink of. rhym is very difficult, and it dose sometimes limmit the writers limmits in a pooem, but this is very good :)

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