Thoughts Poem by Anna Rheana Machin

Thoughts

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I miss you boy
I wish you was still mine
I want you love
And you body that was so damn fine
I think a bout all the times we shared
All the pain we held back
All the love we had as though we were
Two hearts painted black
People never understood us
We were just the outcasts
I thought that I wouldn’t find a heart like mine
I found love a hoped it would last
Now I’m sitting here, waiting for
Someone to open the door
To my heart waiting for love
Hoping and wishing to runaway
And be with someone who knows the real me
Not having to hide my thoughts anymore
Not hiding the pain, the hurt, the broken pride
The strangeness of my life
Hoping to find someone who loves me for
The woman that I am
When will I find the Mr. Right for me?
Where is he at?
Why does it hurt to think of you?
When will I let your memory go?
I never hoped to find a love that
Would torment me so

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2017

I wish you was still mine Pain, love, all things we shared, Now I’m sitting here, waiting for Someone to open the door Not hiding the pain, the hurt, the broken pride Why does it hurt to think of you? These are the points which i collected from your poem. Thank you very much for this poem It shows the brilliance of your mind Love, its mysteries, pain, suffering, the sense of loss, deep wounds which may remain a whole life time. A very good poem. well expressed. Tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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Anna Rheana Machin

Anna Rheana Machin

Ridgecrest, California
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