Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Time's Tell Comments

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Time, flowing by and by
With sweat from the brow
And aging of the vine
As time passes by feverishly
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Eric The Viking
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Adeline Foster 08 July 2011

Now that is a well turned poem. There are no extraneous words to tangle the senses. Try mine – Frustrated Plans - Adeline

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