Wednesday, July 22, 2015

To Hell Or Barbados Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wither goest thou, Jim?
Wither goest thou in the pale September light?
Leaves burnished by the Indian sun
Fall in time with your flagstoned steps.
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Paul Francis
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P.S....Awesome title, which is what initially drew me to this fine work...Titles are EVERYTHING...as when you are looking at dozens & dozens of titles to open and read...It has to be something that catches your minds eye, and speaks to you...Hey, open me...my poem is even better than my title...Unfortunately, as I see it on this site, most people don't give enough thought to an eye catching title...~fJR~

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Much poetic verve fuels this pen-gem including its mild smack of Shakespearian tongue...An interesting storyline brings it all home...Solid crafting ~FjR`

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