Friday, December 12, 2008

Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

recoil from the sacrifice,
love asks us such a deep price,
so much pain it requires
you say no but it is such a lie
...
Read full text

Lorenzo Cruz
COMMENTS
Duh Huh 19 February 2009

You're very loving, understanding and patient and your poem so well versed. :)

0 0 Reply

I love the ending.. So much love and hurt all in one.. This poem has a lot of emotions in it.. Great work ~Krista~

0 0 Reply
Lorenzo Cruz

Lorenzo Cruz

South Bend, IN
Close
Error Success