Friday, September 18, 2009

Tomorrow After Yesterday Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your hands cupped together,
holding an ocean of tears,
Your eyes are the clouds,
of the atmosphere,
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Amber Leigh
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george george 21 September 2009

Nice portayal of despair and hope. I loved 'waiting for the pain to become part of the past' - Well Done!

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