Tuesday, June 8, 2010

True North Comments

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A precious gem,
exquisite,
tucked safely away
from greedy, jealous eyes.
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Amy Serhienko
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Yacov Mitchenko 08 June 2010

This is a fine poem, Amy. You describe the North well; the images and associations are fresh and vivid. It closes nicely with the reference to the compass. Most poems on this site have cliches. I see none here. Thanks.

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