Monday, January 20, 2003

Tug Comments

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The tug on my arm but soon spread
Perhaps now they could prove me there.

I've been watching the sky closely & for some time,
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Ben Doyle
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William Stephen Doyle 19 June 2020

Great poem. Surreal journey, waiting for the twists and turns, leading to a ghost. Nice balance between reality and the otherside.

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