Sunday, February 8, 2009

Under The Rain Comments

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My feet are cold,
And my hands too,
But my heart, it burns so.
I'm walking under the rain,
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Siryoc ( Zeinab Mahsa )
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Jan Harvey 08 February 2009

Your poem resonates a ideal picture, complete and with great wisdom. Images come alive. With detail does arise a kind and thoughtful theme. Thank You. Jan Welcome to comment mine too.

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