Under The Waters Edge Poem by New Beginnings

Under The Waters Edge

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struggle
struggle
as i may
never enough to brake through
fight
fight
wont let go
no air left to evan waste on fighting
so i just sail along
still under waters edge
until i learn what way to move
to get unstuck
to get free
to break the surface

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 December 2008

It is difficult to sail under the water edge but one day you will break the surface....nice poem.

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