Sunday, March 29, 2009

Unquenched Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

To stare into a swamp of a face
Bogged with lily pads
And tainted with twin waterfalls
Cascading down the soft curvatured plane
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Martin Byrne
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Jerry Byrne 22 April 2009

Ahhh son, just a pleasure to ready your verse. I really like this, long may you write poetry and verse and cherish the gift

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LOVEFOOL Aka 29 March 2009

Great write very vivid with much truth I love the line about pmt 10

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