Thursday, April 24, 2008

Unspoken Comments

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I told you once I loved you
In intoxicated breaths
You never heard a single sound
Of anything I said
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Olivia Capulet
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Lissa P 24 April 2008

deep, moving As they say a good poem is just the right words in the right order well all your words were completly correct and in an astronaomicla oreder

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Olivia Capulet

Olivia Capulet

Worksop, Nottinghamshire
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