Unsure Poem by Candice Key

Unsure

Rating: 3.0


Standing,
Stopping,
Frozen is her body,
She’s trying to move,
But something is stopping her from going forward.

Focused is her mind on trying to exert energy from within herself.
Minutes pass as like as hours have gone by and still silence is all around.

Staring,
Wondering,
Hundreds of eyes looking towards her,
Waiting for a glimmer of hope.

Breath one is taken and breath two is not far behind,
She stands, she waits, and for a few mere seconds she realizes that all she had to do was look at the man she will be next too for the rest of her life.

She takes a step and that starts the motion of her life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 04 September 2009

Another great ending to another great poem. I love your style of writing the progression the detail and the story. You are 4sure a very talented writer.

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