Thursday, July 31, 2008

Until We Meet Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the whisper in the breeze,
the laughter in the rain,
the warmth of the sun,
the light shining through the clouds
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Priscilla Monroy
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Adeline Foster 07 December 2008

I truly like this poem. It has a caliber that shows your potential. Attention to grammar and spelling is the mark of a serious poet. This poem shows that you do think with expert poetic ability. I would like to see some of your other poems edited to express that ability. You do have potential. Adeline

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Priscilla Monroy

Priscilla Monroy

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