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Monday, March 24, 2008

Vultures Comments

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Sorrow weighs too much for some,
years being draged behind.
Yet they only weigh as much to sprung,
and raise a window blind.
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Shiva Pillai 24 March 2008

Very good selection of words... I noticed that you changed the Title from Sorrow to Vultures: -) I have liked the way you ended the poem.

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