Waiting For Redemption Poem by Allan Thorne

Waiting For Redemption

Rating: 5.0


He sits across from me
Avoiding my eyes
Talking to anyone but me.

There was a time,
When he was young,
When he sat at the table,
pencil in hand,
Looking at me expectantly,
Waiting to take notes
On what ever tripe
I had to hand him.

It is hard but it is just
The icons must be thrown down
The old order trampled under foot
To make way for something new.

I will have to wait
For him to find me again,
Pick me up
Wash off the neglect
And decide if there isn't something there
Of value after all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 06 August 2008

Parenthood can be so painful - you've captured the difficulties so poignantly. The last stanza is heart rending. S :)

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Allan Thorne

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Bellows Falls VT
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