Friday, May 12, 2017

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Was it love the first time you told me you loved me?
Or was it just another sentence phrased by the flow of affection rushing through your veins.

Was it love when I said those words back to you?
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Wyy Halliwell
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Rajnish Manga 12 May 2017

Though, this happens to be the first poem of Wyy Halliwell on PH, there is maturity in expression and style which makes it look like the work of a seasoned poet. Thanks and congrats. I quote: Was it love the first time you told me you loved me? Was it love when I said those words back to you? Or was it just the pleasant sounds from the flutes of a snake charmer. Or is it the fear of a thousand insecurities wailing in unison?

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