WAT IS THE TIME OF DAY WHEN ALL U CAN DO IS SLEEP AND DREAM OF A BRIGHTER DAY! WHEN A STORM HITS EVERY WALL IN THY ROOM AND IT SIMPLY BEGINS TO FADE AWAY AS U SNEAK A PEAK TO MAKE SURE ITS GONE AWAY IT SURPRIZES U WIT TWO SURPRIZING HITS EACH AND EVERY DAY TIL FINALLY THE COLD HAS GONE AWAY AND TOOK THE STORM AWAY!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very interesting way of presenting this poem. I would suggest breakiing it up into lines so others may easily understand the flow of the piece. It has great rythym but is bunched together that it kinda loses it effect. nonetheless great poem that's pleasing to the ears. and insightful to the eyes.