Thursday, January 28, 2010

We Are Made For Each Other Comments

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You waited for me all the night
With your soft body,
Your smooth arms, bright locks of hair
Rosy lips, plump legs,
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Ratan Bhattacharjee
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 April 2010

‘…You became a river with thousand ripples /I became a boat floating gleefully ever…’ This is the ‘rose-spot’ spot of the poem for me…Uncle …finish was gosh to me….is it an anti-climax…drooping readers from height of exultation to exclusion lolol… Any thing poets can ad does …that’s why its p-o-e-t-r-y alas wish-unfilling-filling-spreetree! Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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