‘…You became a river with thousand ripples /I became a boat floating gleefully ever…’
This is the ‘rose-spot’ spot of the poem for me…Uncle …finish was gosh to me….is it an anti-climax…drooping readers from height of exultation to exclusion lolol…
Any thing poets can ad does …that’s why its p-o-e-t-r-y alas wish-unfilling-filling-spreetree!
Voted 10++
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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‘…You became a river with thousand ripples /I became a boat floating gleefully ever…’ This is the ‘rose-spot’ spot of the poem for me…Uncle …finish was gosh to me….is it an anti-climax…drooping readers from height of exultation to exclusion lolol… Any thing poets can ad does …that’s why its p-o-e-t-r-y alas wish-unfilling-filling-spreetree! Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK