Friday, October 2, 2009

We Lose It Comments

Rating: 5.0

From virginity to fertility - it goes.
From blood to lust, innocence to trust,

we lose them all – they go.
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Hazel Buchan Cameron
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Susan Jarvis 02 October 2009

A well crafted poem. The brevity of the couplets and flow of internal rhyme serve to heighten the pathos of the message. An affecting and admirable piece of writing. S :)

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