Wednesday, June 6, 2007

What A World Comments

Rating: 5.0

What kind of world is this
This world I call my own
Were even a young child
Is afraid of going home
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Jocelynn Halbauer
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Shadura Lee 28 July 2008

i love this poem.....this poem tell the truth and i hope to one day be as great of an author as you

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Tordai Noemi 26 June 2008

I like this poem, it's only about the reality. It's sad that our world has become like this.

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Jocelynn Halbauer

Jocelynn Halbauer

Port Alberni, B.C
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