What Have I Done? ? ? ? Poem by BRIDGEY Richards

What Have I Done? ? ? ?



We go day by day
Through night to sun
What is there to do?
I hear the voices,
I see the beauty,
I can not touch though?
WHY? ? ?
What have I done?
Someone help me?
Someone save me?
I live a very unhappy life: (
What am I doing still alive?
I know what God intends....
WHAT HAVE I DONE? ? ? ?
Do I even deserve this?
I love SCHOOL! ! ! ! !
I love to listen! ! ! !
I HATE arguing and everything that happens!
WHAT HAVE I DONE? ? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zander Pearson 11 April 2010

I believe there deleted now... I have no idea how the three exact same comments got on there......

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Zander Pearson 02 April 2010

From this and the other poems you have written, I can infer you've had (or are having) a very difficult life. And you use writing poetry to express your feelings in a way you usually otherwise can't. :) That's what writing's for! :) The poetry is very emotional and deep, and you perfect every aspect of a poem that there can be. Simply amazing. Keep writing! -Zander

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