Saturday, August 1, 2009

What I Felt Comments

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you walk by me and it hurts much
i miss looking into your eyes and your gentle touch
i see you in the halls and my soul starts to burn
i wish you could see how much i want another turn
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Prakash Mehra 09 November 2009

Sentiments are flowing.

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Afzal Shauq 02 August 2009

you walk by me and it hurts much i miss looking into your eyes and your gentle touch i see you in the halls and my soul starts to burn i wish you could see how much i want another turn another chance just to say that i love you sweet very sweet poem.. with the above rich cverses and the meaningful way of expression.. really a good and soul touching poem..thansk for your long comments dear tyna.. respect your words..10/10

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