What The Earth Told The Sun Ii Poem by Arta Krasniqi

What The Earth Told The Sun Ii



It takes
eight long minutes
for your light
to reach my lips
and anything between
me and you
will be an eclipse!

Friday, June 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 02 June 2017

Your first Earth/Sun poem is so positive with Earth delighted to orbit/dance around the Sun. but this one seems to be clouded by barely concealed jealousy. Earth is possessive of Sun's kisses and sees potentials recipients as intruders to be eclipses. Or am I reading too much into the scenario? ?

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