Thursday, January 2, 2003

What Would You Do Comments

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What would you do if I wasn't here
Would you get someone else to fill my armchair?
How would you cope? Would you get in a state?
Without me there would you vegetate.
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Eleanor Dunn
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Alison Mary Dunn 31 October 2006

Eleanor this poem is beautifully written. The lines which stood out for me: - 'The young girl that is in me, has not flown away' 'Behind my old eyes looking out at you there' It's straight from the soul whether the person in the poem is you or not. It simply shows you have great compassion and love in you. It really moved me! Ally

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