Whats Gone Wrong? Poem by John Prexcel Carodan

Whats Gone Wrong?

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We started as friend and shared memories
Laughed as loud as we can and tell stories
we planned our life ahead of us
as friends at first till we found love but were not in a rush


i never thought of us being together
togetherness that i hope that will bought us to forever
its a beautiful 3 years that we shared our laughter
ups and down as it is but we managed because we are a fighter

but not a typical love story that has a happy ever after
we lived together and God brought us a baby angel
but things change and roads differ
not the same as before the spark gone our summer became a cold weather..


Shouted at each other problem matter always a quarrel
Silent treatment and fighting all over, does it ring a bell?
yes we parted and she left me out of nowhere
i have nowhere to run regret comes after
You know what the sad part is?
Our baby daughter my angel, then she whisper


Whats gone wrong Father why we left you with Mother
Tears start falling flasback started and i cried after
My sweet pea my angel if i have chance id rather
id rather fight for our family than fighting your mother
i should have pursue the relationship coz y'all matter

Its too late for regret and for hope
your moms mind is close and she already cut the rope
The rope that serve as our connection as one
now your there im here alone and our family is GONE

Thursday, September 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Prexcel Carodan 07 September 2018

This really happen to me...Im doing poems based on experience

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Marwin Danao 07 September 2018

your poem will teach a lesson for those person who are not giving importance to their life and relationship..nice poem very inspiring

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John Prexcel Carodan 06 September 2018

I hope you like it Thanks for reading

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