LaRhonda Renee

When? - Poem by LaRhonda Renee

My life
When will it start?
The aching
When will it leave my heart?
The stress
When will it ease?
The cleaning
When will it please?
The tears
When will they stop falling?
My freedom
When will it stop calling?

I'm tired of being lied to
Tired of trying to
Tired of dumb ass dudes
Tired of haters ruining my mood
Behind my back, tired of being talked about
Tired of taking the nice route
Tired of thinking, what will i do then
Happiness, when will it start again

Is it time to lose control?
Is it time to express what's killing my soul?
Is it time to let them know how i feel?
Is it time to let go the bull and keep it real?
Is it time to fight and fuss?
I really don't know
But releasing my anger is a must`! ! !

Comments about When? by LaRhonda Renee

  • (5/6/2011 8:46:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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