When All Is Down Poem by NIGEL LESMOIRGORDON

When All Is Down

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When all is down and come to nought
The path we take is rarely thought
To end in more than misery;
And what more can we prove to be
Of something eyes can never see.
A street of dirty dreaminess
A green-tinged lane from nobleness
Has stretched perception up to this
But left our feet in mud;
Swirling patterns, burning atoms,
Molding minds in raging matter
Heat upon heat
The shameless stars
Make life a thorough melting pot
That raves at nightmare pitch
Binding a body tight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacob Wharton 10 March 2012

Wow, that's very deep and lyrical. The conclusion attacked me. I love the voice, well done.

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