Friday, June 17, 2016

When I Surrendered Comments

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Evil danced around
mocking at my weakened soul
While angels calmed me down
when I failed to take my breath
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Muhiba Naik
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2016

I drop down my eyes and head To let them hear the dirge I have been singing for years....this is a beautiful poem...... innocence, falling into the evil hands, helplessness, struggle, complaining. even the angels left me.......... pathetic........ dirge........We all go through such situations in life.... courage and the strength to go on........... and finding consolation in the thought there is an Almighty one who sees everything............. i felt with you in this poem...whether is only a poetic imagination or truth...... thank you very much dear poetess. tony

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