Saturday, September 2, 2006

When Mankind Suffers Comments

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More tears rolled down her dimpled cheek,
The tears rolled fast and slipped down her face;
Oh! She had cried for days together;
Her son had died.
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Swapan Deep Singh
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Jasleen Kaur 28 June 2008

heartbreaking poem, , , greatly made the contrast between misfortune and the fortune that man had himself chosen....when shall these fights end..... just ruthless killing of the innocent people............ when shall man realise for what he has come in this world for.....

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Donny S 03 September 2006

This is such a sad poem......truly you have brought out the sadness here..... My favourite lines 'Man kills man. Better than us are the cannibals; For they have been made so by Mother Nature. But we are the ones who slaughter our race. And have been made so by our own cruel nature. God now cries to see the present man; For he had not made the man who thought he was “He”. ' So, so true....so, so heartbreaking.... Please read my poem on the Mumbai bombings... keep up the good work... - Dona -

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Nalini Hebbar 02 September 2006

you bring out the hurt and tears of the unfortunate incident very heartbreakingly...do read my poem 'butcher of amritsar'...love...nalini

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