Wednesday, July 7, 2010

When My World Has Fallen Comments

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When my world has fallen

Remember the sound that travelled every ear
The warm embrace of every winter’s year
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Jody Britoe
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Gianni Hsiao 07 July 2010

your poem really moves me! we will meet the moment when our worlds has fallen!

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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