M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,655 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Whirlwind - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Thoughts making wave in my head
Heart becoming vast like the sky
You left me alone in the desert of life
Counting dune of mountain in my eyes

Tears flowing like river
emotions gathering like clouds
fear flashes like Lightning
Patience I am fastening.

Gone is now whirlwind
Counting what’s’ left within
Recouping my resources
To make a masterpiece

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Whirlwind by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/21/2015 10:50:00 AM)


    Gone is now whirlwind
    Counting what’s’ left within
    Recouping my resources
    To make a masterpiece...Wonderful poem.
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  • Anita Sharma (11/19/2015 9:54:00 AM)


    Tears flowing like river
    emotions gathering like clouds
    fear flashes like Lightning
    Patience I am fastening..............such heartfelt write sir, loved and liked
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/18/2015 1:06:00 PM)


    Love generates emotion like clouds. Tear flows in love like river. Thoughts are making waves in vast sky of head. Very fantastic expression shared definitely. Imagery sings here in deep love. Interesting...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015



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