Sunday, September 7, 2008

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Fingers flow fingers flow
Sail on the keys of the pianoforte get my soul blown
Foots on the pedal you play slow
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Mike Gift
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Mario Gonzalez 07 September 2008

Good poem, very lyrical. I liked how you simplified the words to store the deeper meaning inside!

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